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    Thursday
    May202010

    The Picnic 

    Root beer floats.

    Children play

    under the

    arms of trees.

     

    Hey, check out

    that old dandy

    in pressed jeans

    brings his own

    folding picnic tables.

     

    Honey decks 

    the tables in fine

    acrylic ware.

    A third fires

    the mesquite grill.

     

    Sweet smoke curls

    dance in the breeze

    drifting by family

    and friends.

     

    Whispering wind 

    tickles toasted ears

    with auburn tresses.

    Wind whispers,”

    I am here.”

    Find a peace

    of the jigsaw puzzle.

     

    Time to eat.

    A spot remains empty,

    waiting.

     

    — Ann Rodela

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    Reader Comments (2)

    Thank you for sharing this beatiful poem with me, reminded me of my duty at school yard when I am teaching....go there back tomorow...all the best from Beata

    May 23, 2010 | Unregistered CommenterBeata Stasak

    Thanks for reading my poem Beata. I left a comment on your link. Wow, lady your write deep from your heart! Have fun in school. :)

    May 23, 2010 | Unregistered CommenterAnn

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